*sings in an embarrassed tone*

[serafina20]

I fucked up

I read the wrong fuckign part of Lex Luthor, Ace Reporter and got *everything* wrong. God dammit.

Comments

aww

[astrea9562.livejournal.com]

I promise not to fret and will wait. The Morgan/Kal prequel is worth it, ok?

{{hugs}}

Re: aww

[serafina20.livejournal.com]

Well, I might push on since the worst of the mistakes are probably over. Apparently, Clark had *just* started experimenting with guys the night before Morgan found him, and then he hadn't been a prostitute until Morgan offered to pay. I'll gloss over that, because even in a fit of honesty, I don't think Clark would tell Lex that he was sucking off a line of guys when Morgan found him (especially when considering Lex's mental state at the time of the confession).

The other mistake was the fact that Clark told Lex that he refused to do anything with Morgan for 2 weeks after being hired--including steal somthing from LuthorCorp. I might keep the first time he tried to seduce Morgan, then add in two weeks where he refuses everything, only to loop back and have Morgan refuse Kal (relizing the underlying issues of what Kal keeps saying no). So it'll still be a bit of a power game, and I won't have to change too much.

It's just annoying.

[sage]

Hmm...you could call it an AU from the AU? Or a dream sequence. Maybe Morgan fell out of his chair watching Kal on the security cameras and banged his head on the corner of a credenza, and everything afterwards has been his comatose wet-dream?

Don't fret. Just have fun with it!

[serafina20.livejournal.com]

The mistakes are both before and after Morgan hires Kal. I forgot that Clark said he hadn't been a prostitute before Morgan offered to pay, and that he'd only been with a guy the night before he met Morgan. I can probably put some off to him just not remembering clearly (he was, after all, high during that entire time, so it's possible his memory of what happened is fuzzy). I also think I can get away with him sucking off the line of guys in the opening scene, because when he was telling Lex his history with Morgan, Lex was very close to being suicidally depressed, and Clark sense that. So he could conceivably have glossed over everything to protect Lex.

From there, the only thing I really need to change is to add a two week period in which Clark refuses to do anything with or for Morgan. That will actually be kind of fun, because by the time Clark decides to behave and be a good little rentboy, Morgan can turn the tables on him.

So, it is salvagable. Just annoying. ;)