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1. What does it mean to bury your lead? I think I get it, but I'd like to hear it from someone more informed than I am.

2. In the type of cars Lex has, do the front seats recline, or is there no where for them to go? I honestly have no idea what they look like inside. And, would they be leather interior?



Not much to say except that I loved every second of it. It was well written, fast paced, and very well acted. My only quibble is that if Clark's tearing off the door of Perry's car was supposed to be due to his out of control powers, then he needs to stop doing it under normal circumstances. I even took him super speeding Perry out of the car at face value, even though I thought it was dumb, then later I realized he wasn't in control of his powers. But, yeah, have Clark stop destroying property and throwing everyone tweny feet all the time, and the episode would be better.

The rest was ... great. I loved Lex. He was wonderful in his anger and going out of control. I hope the pyschologist is for real, because I'm sick of everyone betraying him.

I liked Lana. Even though I was giggling at the idea that she's spent the last 14 years trying to put it behind her, and she didn't want to talk about it, I totally bought where she was coming from. I see her constantly bringing up the past and not being able to let it go; Lana sees herself as constantly trying to move on and not being allowed to. I just wish she was able to see the main person holding her back was herself ... except, she may have at the end. We'll have to see what happens after next week's episode (of which I'm trying to withhold judgement, but I cannot help but think of scornfully).

Chloe's hair was great. There's a part of me that wants to cut it like hers. And I liked her character this week. Except for the dumb thumb over Perry's first name. The rest was cool.

That one duded had something to do. Can't remember what product he pushed, though.

Clark is pretty. I spent the last scene between him and Perry cooing over that fact. And I loved their interactions.

Oh, and Perry? He's so going to know. He has to. How can he look at Clark, and look at what he said about Clark, and not realize Clark and Superman are the same person. Does he know in the comics? Because I'm comics clueless, but I think it's an interesting idea if he does know.

Okay, I need to write. Seriously. Still working on the 'Ryan' COTW fic. Oh, and I think I'm going to have to title one of the fics Corner of the World (#): Corner of the World. Can I do that?

Date: 2003-10-30 07:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] digitalwave
Serafina,

1) In reporting a story it's supposed to be written in the form of an inverted pyramid, i.e. the most important facts to the least important. Burying the lead is when a writer doesn't follow this format, they let the crux of the story get buried in the less important details of the story. That's why journalistic writing is supposed to be short, crisp and to the point. You're not supposed to lose the message in the midst of flowery prose.

2) I don't know about the really expensive rides like Lex has but I used to do the newspaper ads for the local Lexus/BMW dealer here in Louisville, they have leather seats. They also are heated and have controls to adjust the degree of softness against your butt but that's beside the point. :)

Hope that this helps.

Date: 2003-10-31 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilexa.livejournal.com
*poke* How do you know about burying ledes? And inverted pyramids? Are you on of "Us"?

Date: 2003-11-01 07:12 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] digitalwave
Are you on of "Us"? Only a little around the edges. I do graphic design and have done some ad work for the local paper. My hubby however is the media person; his degrees are in journalism and mass communication. I've picked up a lot of stuff through osmosis through the years. Not too bad for an ex-nurse. :)

Date: 2003-11-01 02:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! All the info was very helpful.

Date: 2003-10-30 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nebt-het.livejournal.com
I think I'm going to have to title one of the fics Corner of the World (#): Corner of the World. Can I do that?

Nope...absolutely not! Just kidding. How about Corner of the Universe?
Yes still under the snarky Perry influence..I will go away now. *w*


Date: 2003-10-31 07:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefirethorn.livejournal.com
AWESOME icon, by the way!

icon

Date: 2003-10-31 02:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nebt-het.livejournal.com
Thanks! That was made by elegy.

Date: 2003-11-01 02:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
Corner of the Universe doesn't work, because the fic will probalby lie heavily on the COTW theme. *things* I'll figure it out.

And your icon is wonderful. :)

Date: 2003-10-30 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefirethorn.livejournal.com
1) Lex was HOT. Yummy. And then getting all worked up when Clark was being threatened......

2) Yes, thank you Chloe for better hair.

Date: 2003-11-01 02:58 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
1) Lex was HOT. Yummy. And then getting all worked up when Clark was being threatened......

He really, really was. *sigh* Great episode.

Date: 2003-10-30 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] happyminion.livejournal.com
Burying the lead basically means that the story starts off with what everyone already knows, and the *real* news, the never before heard stuff, is buried inside the story. The lead should always be your first sentence.

For instance, instead of Lionel Luthor, long known as The Magnificent Bastard on message boards across the Internet, has been terrorizing Smallville and Metropolis citizens for years, blah blah blah, two paragraphs pass, then

Intrepid girl reporter Chloe Sullivan recently uncovered evidence indicating that Luthor is involved in human cloning, using mysterious meteor rock as its source.

Human cloning should be the screaming lead, you know? Not all the things everyone already knows about Lionel being a nasty s.o.b.

It's quite possible that I buried a few leads in my early days of journalism. Heh. I'm well acquainted with the term.

You would look really cute with a Chloe cut, btw.

Date: 2003-11-01 03:01 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
Thanks for the example! It made things really clear for me. :)

You would look really cute with a Chloe cut, btw.

Thanks, but I decided not to go that way. Instead, i've got it all one length in a bob type thing. Maybe next time. :)

Date: 2003-10-31 07:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefirethorn.livejournal.com
And by the way, FABULOUS icon! I loved the scene where Clark was so obviously jealous/hostile/violent toward Lex's new brother.

Date: 2003-11-01 03:01 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
Thank you! And, yes, it really is a great scene. :)

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