Fic: Sona

Nov. 20th, 2007 06:29 am
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Fic: Sona
Rating: Mature
Pairing: Michael/Mahone
Summary: Hell on earth is found at La PenitenciarĂ­a Federal de Sona.

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8, Part 9, Part 10, Part 11, Part 12, Part 13, Part 14, Part 15, Part 16, Part 17, Part 18, Part 19, Part 20, Part 21, Part 22



The rage inside was like an inferno. It threatened to explode and consume him and this whole God forsaken hellhole. This mockery of justice, little more than a holding pen for animals and villains and fools.

And him. Mr. FBI. The man who'd dared pursue him like a dog across the country. Who thought he could order T-Bag around, confine him to a closet like a child. Who treated him with markedly less respect than was warranted because he thought an education and degree made him better than T-Bag.

The man was nothing. The man's intellect was puny, minuscule, microscopic and paltry compared to his own.

And this nothing, this nonentity dared to defile the perfection of Michael Scofield.

T-Bag clenched his fist. He walked up to the nearest man, turned him around and punched. The man tried to fight back but T-Bag didn't give him the chance. He knocked the man to the ground and set on him, kicking his ribs. Felt them crack under his boots. Watched the blood as it spread hot, wet patches on his shirt. And when T-Bag kicked again, felt the crack of the sternum, his victim began bleeding from his mouth. Eyes grew dim.

He stepped on the man's throat. Felt it give. Felt the last gurgle, the last death rattle.

And still he wasn't appeased.

Pulling away from the dead man, T-Bag continued away from the cell where the FBI agent was pounding away into Pretty's gorgeous body as if he were a piece of meat. Touching and pawing what wasn't his.

Pretty belonged to him. He had from the first minute T-Bag had seen him. He just hadn't had the chance to properly lay claim yet, but there was never any doubt it would happen. T-Bag would have him.

And now... and now that FBI agent had touched him. Taken the Pretty the way T-Bag had always wanted.

And Pretty?

Had writhed and moaned like a bitch in heat, taking it. Loving it.

It wasn't fair.

He exited into the sun drenched yard. The little one was just to the right, crouching in the dirt, playing marbles by himself. T-Bag wasted no time. He stormed across the yard, grabbed him by the scruff of the neck, and slammed him into the wall.

"How long have Michael and Mahone been going at it like dogs?" he demanded.

The boy clawed at T-Bag's arm, eyes wide. "Que?"

"Michael. And Alexander Mahone. How long have they been fucking?" To accentuate his point, T-Bag thrust his hips into the boy's, undulating.

"Um... ah... Three day? Two? Before Raoul. Sunday. I go to church, and when I come back, they are together."

"Why?"

The boy blinked. "Because Michael is pretty and Senor is very handsom."

He slammed the boy against the wall. "But why? How did it happen? What brought them together, because, believe me, I know Michael Scofield. He wouldn't just start putting out in the seventh circle of hell for no reason."

The child just looked at him, eyes blank.

"What happened Sunday to drive them together?"

"I don't know."

"Tell me what happened that day?"

"I don't know!"

T-Bag reached up with his good hand. He pinched the boy's nose closed and covered his mouth. "Walk me from the moment you got up, to whenever you left them. Tell me what happened."

He began to nod frantically.

"Talk." He removed his hand.

"Okay. Okay. We get up. And Senor is not there. He is gone, and Michael say... who sell drugs. I tell him Carlos, because that is who I tell Senor sell drugs. And there is food and blankets gone. So Michael ask me take him. I do, and we find Carlos and Alex. And he is getting drugs. Michael gives drugs back to Carlos, but he will not give us our stuff back. And then Michael.... he hit Alex and drag him back to the closet. I go to church."

"Michael hit Alex?"

"Si."

He eased the pressure on the boy. Drew into his thoughts, considering the implication.

Obviously, the Pretty enjoyed pain. Both the giving and receiving. Which meant, as T-Bag had long suspected, his rejection of T-bags advances were nothing but him playing hard-to-get. Something T-Bag could appreciate.

What he didn't appreciate was Michael allowing another man to besmirch his body while being coy with T-Bag. But that he could deal with later.

In the meantime, it appeared that Mr. FBI, Agent Alexander Mahone was a bit of a junkie. And while he may have it under control for the moment, T-Bag knew addiction.

His mood vastly improved.

"Thank you," he purred, leaning in.

The boy's skin was so smooth, not even the hint of stubble yet. Smooth and young and so very tasty.

"No," the child said softly. He pulled his face away from T-Bag's questing tongue. Lowered his eyelashes and pushed.

"I don't believe the slut of Sona is in any position to refuse me," he said. He slipped his hand underneath the boy's shirt. Stroke the flat little tummy before sliding his hand underneath the loose waistband of his slacks.

"You have nothing to trade. I do business. Not..." He pushed. When T-Bag didn't move, he tried again. A frantic look came over his face when T-Bag only increased the pressure, hand sliding further down his pants.

The fear made T-Bag's head spin.

"Stop!" The boy kicked him in the shins and began struggling in earnest. That delicious panic was painting his face. His fingers clawed at T-Bag's arms and tears welled in his eyes.

But, as wonderful as it all was, what T-Bag really needed was a quick fuck, not a long drawn out seduction.

So, he closed off the boy's airway again.

"Listen," he whispered in Tony's ear. "I really don't have time for this. Not today. Next time, you can fight me all you want, as long as you want. But I just spent the last two hours watching Alexander Mahone fucking Michael--my Michael--into oblivion. And then, he woke up, rolled Michael over, and fucked him again. I'm livid at seeing the desecration of my property and I'm feeling randy. So, unless you want me taking your unconscious body, of which I have no problem because it really is a beautiful body, stop fighting and come with me."

The struggling stopped. Big, crocodile tears rolled from his eyes, and he nodded.

"Good." He pulled his hand away. Replaced it with his mouth. Kissed the unresponsive on below his.

He pinched the boy.

That got the response he was looking for. Kissing, tears, and trembling all at once. The best combination.

"Hey!"

T-Bag was roughly pulled away from the boy. Spun around and turned to face the fucking giant.

"You no touch him!" Raoul said in that slow, awkward was of his. He looked at Tony. Frowned. "Why you cry?"

Tony shook his head.

Raoul looked back. "He mine. You no touch."

"I was just..."

"No!"

One huge, meaty paw came out and smacked T-Bag across the face. The blow sent him tumbling back, falling on his ass in the dirt.

"Mine. You no touch," the giant reiterated. Then he took Tony by the arm and led him off into the prison.

T-Bag watched them go, wiping a trail of blood that oozed from his mouth. New plan. First, kill the giant. Then, kill the FBI agent. And then, he could finally claim his property.

Date: 2007-11-20 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morphinelovexx.livejournal.com
There really are no words, poetic or otherwise to describe how I feel for you and your amazing writing. Seriously, I looked.

One helluva update, especially considering the fact that I've been wicked bent out of shape over T-Bag and his recent lack of screen time. Not to mention the part where the poor man just can't seem to catch a break. I know, I know, it's like, "X, quit rooting for the pedophile!" but I just can't help myself because he's so damn...cool.

As for the actual addition itself-I think every chapter I remember that I'm just absolutely in love with this story you've created. Bringing back T-Bag's obsession with Michael(which I think some fangirls forgot-naughty, NAUGHTY fangilrs)to the extent where he's actually thinking of Michael as /his/ and getting pissed at what is going on around Sona was just the perfect way to remind everyone of WHY most of us fell in love with the character in the first place.

Bravo, Serafina. You've seriously done it again.

Date: 2007-11-21 10:17 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
I miss T-Bag too, but I'm also very afraid he's outlived his purpose on the show. However, as long as RK continues to bring it, I'm perfectly happy for him to be there.

He's fun to write and fun to play with. He's also very intimidating. I love the fact that now in Sona he and Alex both think of Michael as their property. It'll be fun later. :)

Thank you!!!

Date: 2007-11-20 06:39 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Thank you so much. I was anxiously waiting for an update. Wasn't expecting a T-Bag POV, it's great! Is that bad to want T-Bag succeed in roughing sexually up Michael a little bit? Last time was just a teaser.

Date: 2007-11-21 10:18 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
Is that bad to want T-Bag succeed in roughing sexually up Michael a little bit?

If it's bad, I don't want to be good. :)

Thanks.

Date: 2007-11-22 12:15 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Then I can't wait to read next chapters. That and T-Bag and Mahone fighting over Michael is a very exciting programme. You rule.

Date: 2007-11-20 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] niektete.livejournal.com
*bites finger* Sooo torn between deep love of T-Bag and worry about our lovely couple here... *shakes head* Can't decide. At least not until I've read your next chappie ^^

Date: 2007-11-21 10:18 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
Isn't being torn wonderful? More to come. Thanks!

Date: 2007-11-20 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shaitanah.livejournal.com
Brilliant, brilliant and once more brilliant! I'm serious worried about what T-Bag has in mind))))

Date: 2007-11-21 10:18 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-11-20 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laminy.livejournal.com
I was definitly very excited to see a T-Bag centric chapter, his character has always intrigued me. At the same time that he's disgusted me. With your writing, you've managed to do both as well. I think that somewhere, I want to like T-Bag, but when he treats people the way he does it's hard. I can't wait to see where his lusting for Michael goes. Great chapter.

Date: 2007-11-21 11:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
I love T-Bag because, even though he's so awful, he's so fun. He intrigues and disgusts me, too.

Glad you liked the chapter. :)

Date: 2007-11-20 08:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliokleia.livejournal.com
First of all: Tony is back. YAY!!

But then, you frightened me a bit with the... dangerous scene between him and T-Bag.
Yes, yes, I know, arc of suspense, etc. But I can't believe that a smart boy like Tony is acting as helpless as a rabbit under a snake's eye while facing the good Teddy...

Same happened to Michael at the last chapter. T-Bag is NO socerer who throws magic spells around him, that blows everyones walls off.
You let Tony tell him, that Michael has hit Alex, once. Fine. So, why couldn't Michael do just the same with Mr. Bagwell?

Please, don't understand me wrong. I love this series, really I do. You should see me beaming now, after discovering ch. 23!
Wonderful! YIPIIEE!
But... these two little questions... I still can't get them out of my head. :P

Thanks dear, for your effort and for sharing this brilliant series with us.
*Hugs*

P.S. Congratulations for your nominations on *PB_SLASH AWARDS*

Date: 2007-11-21 05:45 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
Well, Tony was being suffocated, so he's panicking. And he's used to being in a subordinate position. It's how he deals with things. He may be a smart boy, but he's also fifteen and underfed and used to being pushed around. Under a dominate personality like T-Bag (and someone who came at him with violence and just got worse), he was cowed.

With Michael, it was that he just didn't care at that point. He wanted to be punished, T-Bag was there. The fight was gone. It wasn't quite as bad as the opening of the story, but he was down and hurting and wanted to be hurt. It honestly didn't matter it was T-Bag; Michael would have responded to anyone like that.

Thanks for the feedback.

Date: 2007-11-20 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wornoutbirks.livejournal.com
Wow. A T-Bag POV. Pretty nifty! Anyway, much love for this still. And I wanna read more!

Date: 2007-11-21 11:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
I didn't think I would be able to write a T-Bag POV, but I managed to. I think it was successful.

Thanks!

Date: 2007-11-22 12:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wornoutbirks.livejournal.com
It was totally successful. I loved reading it.

Date: 2007-11-20 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amodalie.livejournal.com
T-Bag is jealous!!! And up to the point of obsession. (or maybe beyond...)
Wow. I didn't expect this. But he is best when he is all his psychopathic self, isnt't he?
I like your changes of perspective. Make us see all the different sides of Sona.
Wonderful chapter, as always :)))

Date: 2007-11-21 11:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
The root of T-Bag has always been obsession to me. Obsession for control, for knowledge, for dominance. And I love playing with obsession.

Glad you liked it!

Date: 2007-11-20 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brushed-velvet.livejournal.com
Hands off Tony T Bag! I usually have no problem with T Bag's character but this seriously made me *shudder*

I think it was cos it was T Bag's pov and describing Tony as a child that did it so job well done there.

But thank god for Raoul! And I actually find the thought of T Bag watching Alex and Michael fucking quite delicious hehe!

I'm worried that his sly brain is cooking up even more trouble for Michael/Alex though.

"Why?"

The boy blinked. "Because Michael is pretty and Senor is very handsom."


Bwahaha! Best answer ever!

Date: 2007-11-21 11:34 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
Hands off Tony T Bag! I usually have no problem with T Bag's character but this seriously made me *shudder*

I think it was cos it was T Bag's pov and describing Tony as a child that did it so job well done there.


Yeah, it's awful, wasn't it. When T-Bag lusts after Michael, it can be disgusting, but we know Michael can take care of himself. But Tony has been so disempowered by so many things (his age, his looks, having to trade sex to get anything) that having T-Bag go after him is really uncomfortable. Kind of like the scene from last season where he tried to take advantage of the girl. It's just.. wrong.

At the same time, I had to write it.

And I actually find the thought of T Bag watching Alex and Michael fucking quite delicious hehe!

I love voyerism, especially when the vouyer is obsessed with one of the people.

Thanks!
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Date: 2007-11-21 11:35 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] serafina20.livejournal.com
I'm always nervous about writing T-Bag. He's got such a distinct way of speaking, that I'm alway afraid I won't be able to capture it. But it actually wasn't quite as hard as I thought (although I did have to keep referring to the thesaurus for his habit of using the most obscure words possible).

Thanks!!

Date: 2008-12-06 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wicca-faith-fi.livejournal.com
oh i'm starting to like Raoul.he has a certain sense of timing. lol. loving this still. x

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