Wonderful feedback!!!
Dec. 17th, 2004 07:42 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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You couldn't be more right, Kea! Not only is this superbly written, it is, if anything, even better than "Bridge". Serafina, you've invested remarkable depth into the character of Boone - his fears, hopes and feelings of attachment to Jack - and emerged with stunning results. This could serve as a model for what a fanfic ought to be -a compelling narrative with complex characterizations and a real feeling for their inner psychology. By all means continue this story...it's too damn good not to!
Yelsir
That's just some of the best feedback ever. *sigh*
There's a slight possibility I might get to move out soon. My best friend's grandmother has moved into a retirment home for at least a year. Her parents offered to let her move into it and, right now, she's turned it down. She thinks they should rent it out. I said that, if the rent is reasonable, I'll take it and then she can still move in (it's a 2 bedroom and I think it's a house). Then, even if the grandmother moves back in, I'll already have been out for awhile, saving up for a 'real' place, and we'll get to see if we can live togetehr.
She said she'd talk to her parents. *crosses fingers*
IT'S WINTER BREAK!!!!!!
You couldn't be more right, Kea! Not only is this superbly written, it is, if anything, even better than "Bridge". Serafina, you've invested remarkable depth into the character of Boone - his fears, hopes and feelings of attachment to Jack - and emerged with stunning results. This could serve as a model for what a fanfic ought to be -a compelling narrative with complex characterizations and a real feeling for their inner psychology. By all means continue this story...it's too damn good not to!
Yelsir
That's just some of the best feedback ever. *sigh*
There's a slight possibility I might get to move out soon. My best friend's grandmother has moved into a retirment home for at least a year. Her parents offered to let her move into it and, right now, she's turned it down. She thinks they should rent it out. I said that, if the rent is reasonable, I'll take it and then she can still move in (it's a 2 bedroom and I think it's a house). Then, even if the grandmother moves back in, I'll already have been out for awhile, saving up for a 'real' place, and we'll get to see if we can live togetehr.
She said she'd talk to her parents. *crosses fingers*
IT'S WINTER BREAK!!!!!!
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Date: 2004-12-17 09:18 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-12-18 08:27 am (UTC)Thanks! And it's been so much better since I stopped teaming with the other teachers. I'm actually *happy*. :)
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Date: 2004-12-18 12:15 pm (UTC)Yay!
Glad to hear you made through!:-)
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Date: 2004-12-26 12:22 am (UTC)