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aryas_zehral ([personal profile] aryas_zehral) wrote in [personal profile] serafina20 2007-08-30 11:32 am (UTC)

I did wonder if it would be something like that. Neat. :D And thank you for updating so quickly. Makes me happy. Lol.

There was just one thing though, on of the sentences up near the top reads: "They'd find the villains, the women would make a recover, and life would go on." Which doesn't quite make sense. Should it be "the women would recover" or "the woman would make a recovery"? *smile*

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