Sam's house-wifely-ness (an innocent little kink of mine *blush: II*).
YEah, it's an innocent little kink of mine, too. As long as it remains IC, which I'm hoping Sam is. But I see him as a tidy, sort of fussy person, who cleans as a matter of habit and is willing to do it for friends (especially Gene) if necessary. And it's fun to write him cleaning and Gene being rather bemused about it. that line there sent shivers down my spine. So - cold and manipulative, and yet, theoretically, the words are affectionate. Perfect.
I'm glad it did. I wanted to get that very manipulative, creepy tone into those innocent words. It's so much more scary than if he'd been actually, overtly creepy. Because this way, he means well, or at least, he sounds like it and... well, you know.
And, you're right; it should be "too". My fingers type the wrong combination all the time, even though my brain knows the difference. I'll have to go back and fix that. Sorry if it threw you out; I have a bad habit of mixing up words and homonyms and such.
Can I be really cheeky, and say what I thought might be happening? Feel free to send me a, er... a cyber-slap (?) if I'm out of line. It's just - was "Sam Williams" in a relationship with Morgan? Is that how he got all those injuries?
Is Gene going to hurt Morgan for it? :D
Sorry... just thought I'd ask, even though I know that you're not likely to give away any of the (excellent!) plot. *shy grin* Worth a try, right?
Read and see. :) ...and sorry for the uber-review. *coughs* I think I got a little over-the-top. No, not at all! In fact, feel free to leave many uber-reviews. I love them!!
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YEah, it's an innocent little kink of mine, too. As long as it remains IC, which I'm hoping Sam is. But I see him as a tidy, sort of fussy person, who cleans as a matter of habit and is willing to do it for friends (especially Gene) if necessary. And it's fun to write him cleaning and Gene being rather bemused about it.
that line there sent shivers down my spine. So - cold and manipulative, and yet, theoretically, the words are affectionate. Perfect.
I'm glad it did. I wanted to get that very manipulative, creepy tone into those innocent words. It's so much more scary than if he'd been actually, overtly creepy. Because this way, he means well, or at least, he sounds like it and... well, you know.
And, you're right; it should be "too". My fingers type the wrong combination all the time, even though my brain knows the difference. I'll have to go back and fix that. Sorry if it threw you out; I have a bad habit of mixing up words and homonyms and such.
Can I be really cheeky, and say what I thought might be happening? Feel free to send me a, er... a cyber-slap (?) if I'm out of line. It's just - was "Sam Williams" in a relationship with Morgan? Is that how he got all those injuries?
Is Gene going to hurt Morgan for it? :D
Sorry... just thought I'd ask, even though I know that you're not likely to give away any of the (excellent!) plot. *shy grin* Worth a try, right?
Read and see. :)
...and sorry for the uber-review. *coughs* I think I got a little over-the-top.
No, not at all! In fact, feel free to leave many uber-reviews. I love them!!
Thank you!