Grrr

[serafina20]

I'm mostly going to refrain on commenting on things. Partly because I don't wanna and partly becuase I'm better able to comment on stuff after I've seen it twice.

But, during the marriage scene, when Will asked Elizabeth what her choice was, and she turned and screamed, "Barbossa!" There was this sick, twisted little part of me that thought she was choosing Barbossa. Because, dude. Talk about a power couple.

Also, I don't believe the Flying Dutchman-curse thing says that the wife/woman has to stay wherever she is for the full 10 years, just that she be there when her love gets back. So, obviously, Elizabeth was out pirating and such all those years (she is the pirate king, after all), but nipped back to meet her husband (and, as the rumors are circulating, break the curse and bring him home). So, I'm fine with it. She wasn't waiting. She was living.

It seems like there was something funny I was going to say, but I can't remember what it was.

I'm going crazy over this stupid Norrington-Jack-baby!fic. I *know* that I started writing the next scene. I remember writing it, very vividly. But I can't find it anywhere. However, i did find the beginning of a scene that I don't remember writing, but has what is now one of my favorites lines ever in it:

In this scene, Gavin is about 3 or 4 years old. He and Mariah are at the docks so Gavin can see the ship. He dropped his doll and ran back for it.

But he'd only run a few feet back, to where his doll was lying in a puddle.

Mariah sighed and shook her head, a smile tugging at her lips. He'd had the rag doll since he was a mere babe in the cradle, made for him by his ever doting--and self-proclaimed--"Papa". The doll had been made of bits of clothing and stuffing that Jack had picked up from who knew where--although Mariah recognized bits of James's cloths in the doll, thus solving the great, "Who on God's green Earth is stealing my *sleeves*?" debacle--and accessorized in true Jack Sparrow style with bits of gold and beads and many other things that could get lodged in Gavin's throat and choke him to death.


I should have a list or something of all my favorite lines from my fics. Because I am that vain.

Comments

[ceares.livejournal.com]

I love that, very descriptive...very Jack and I'd love to read this when it's finished.

[serafina20.livejournal.com]

This fic is driving me insane. It's been over a year (maybe two) and I still can't decide if I should continue where I left off, or fast forward a few years and do a kidnapping arc. And I still can't decide whether or not to introduce Beckett (mostly because I *really* dont want to bring in Davy Jones, but I do love his character, so...)

Anyway. I'll keep you posted. :)